I live in Bristol UK horror dark fiction and crime are my books of choice and when not reading I like to run
This was certainly different and I had a real problem with the author's writing style from the start. The way he phrased sentences and presented the various characters as they related to each other reminded me of studying Shakespeare at school!....
Josh: "You were playing on our server?"
Tommy:"What's the big deal?"
Arnold: "No worries. I was on some public one. Not yours."
Josh: "How'd you know Tommy was playing then?"
Arnold: "Huh? Nah, I didn't know."
Josh: "You just said you did."
This rather irritating way of placing the speakers name at the start, inserting a colon immediately after, and then stating what was said....
Now having established my concerns, I must admit I was someone smitten with the suggestive and creeping horror. Elizabeth Sanderson is awoken to the news that her son Tommy is missing. What happened on the final night when he disappeared at Devil's Rock when in the company of his friends Louis, Joss and the mysterious Arnold. What is the significance of dark shadows, the crack-head penny, and mysterious notes that appear randomly at night for Elizabeth's attention. Who can she trust; daughter Kate? mum Janice? Detective Allison Murtagh? I read this story over a 24 hour period and found its content very unsettling, the character of Arnold somewhat evil, and the outcome for Tommy, Louis, and Joss sadly inevitable. The events that took place on one fateful night at Devil's Rock cannot fail but make a lasting impression on the reader and that surely must be the mark of a good book.